Descriptive Writing

W.A.L.T: to use descriptive words and language to make our writing more interesting.

We did this piece of writing to practice using descriptive words and language.

                                                  IN THE  JUNGLE 
In the jungle the enormous elephant emerged from the green leafy trees that were swishing quietly in the wind. When the magnificent grey elephant got out of the trees he started to stare at the turquoise deep pond that was rocking gracefully. The pond is as deep as the depths of the ocean. It is as dangerous as a tornado. Close by the stripy zebras are grazing peacefully.

2 stars and a wish:
1st star: putting together the story.
2nd star:getting descriptive words.
Wish: I wish I had time to make more of the story.